Cerzak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dreamyard]

its great, but it sounds choppy at the beginning, which bothers me, but after that everything sounds pro, great job!

Kor-Rune responds:

Thanks! Its just a failed attempt to be edgy at the start lol. glad you liked it though!

[The Associate]

REVIEW: Ok so the song sounds like its going somewhere but its missing some stuff, first of all the drums you used were really basic, if you tried using special drums suited for house music and maybe throw a crash or cymbal it would spice up some things, the melody was also really basic and so was the main structure of the song, some good automation is also missing as well and the track mainly is missing a bassline to make the song feel more 'alive'. good start though im not goign to be hard on you, but i wanted you give you helpful advice that could help you in the future, but i liked the way you started with just kicks than added more drums as it went on, that added alot of interest as to whats coming next to the song which made me stay longer and listen to more of the song, my suggestion is make a simple low melody, and then throw a high melody on top of it so it sounds more insteresting, nice start though. Overall Score: 3.7
Review score: 3.5
Song score: 4

Reinteck responds:

thanks for the review! This was made a while ago when I was just starting out so I was using the stock FL Studio drums and and didn't know alot about layering different synths. Maybe one day soon i will do a re-edit of the song and add some more flavor. Thanks for the constructive criticism! If you want to see one of my newer songs it's called "Everyone Hates Squids." It is near the bottom of my audio submissions. I think that song shows off more complexity and synth layering. Again, thanks for checking out my music!

[Jack The Zipper]

its ok, i like the start, but it is not much different throughout the song, kind of the same with some new percussion or drums, my suggestion is to try to kind of throw another melody later in the song to mix things up a bit, but not bad, just keep practicing and youll get it

73Quantum responds:

I always like to hear thoughts on what i have made, I am a little puzzled about what you said tho 'cause the drums remain the same throughout the track while new melodies are added in the second and third parts?? Hey thanks anyway tho :)

[Summer]

let me guess, fl studio and nexus VST? ;D badass song

TjpjMusic responds:

FL studio is correct but no Nexus. I don't even have Nexus installed. I used mostly Harmor and Sytrus and made most of the sounds myself.

[Origin]

this is a great song for me to listen to while i run, it calms me down and makes me think way less about how tired my body is, this is better than any remix anyone could ever do, and thank the heavens for gifting you with music composing, i wish i had the skill you had, ill just keep practicing, and maybe i will somehow become like you or avicii in a night, but to make it simple and less about my life, AWESOME SONG! (like everyone says)

Geoplex responds:

Aw, thanks.

Keep composing and learning and you'll eventually become as good as you want to be - just takes a lot of motivation, and unfortunately I lack that XD

[Sun Burn]

only 69 plays? this song deserves at least 5000, great jpb!

landon91 responds:

Thanks mate, I appreciate it!

[Uplifter]

very nice, i like the buildup and the tune, flows really well

[Techno Fire]

i love this song, epic as hell

TastyTeo responds:

Thanks mate :D

[Bound by Love]

finally i come across something calm and rhythmic, this would be great to play to make me fall asleep at night, and now im inspired to create a calm melody like this! keep up the good work Bosa!

Bosa responds:

Thank you! I will!

[i9incher - psychosis]

i can tell by the style of this that flstudio was used, and it sounds like the bass synth was from the plugin sytrus, am i right? but great song, it was great to hear in infiltrating the airship, so i came here to hear it myself in better quality, great work on this, keep it up =D

i9incher responds:

the bass was actually from sylenth1 but yes, I used fl-studio to make this. I was experimenting with some drum and bass style beats at the time and that saw just really caught my ear and I fell in love with it haha.